Your smile lights up my world,
In brilliance of a thousand fireflies,
Though I wish I knew you were a bird,
Flying away on wings of lugubrious lies…
I felt myself sinking in throes of burning desire,
Amidst the vales of fidelity and passion,
Your vows couldn’t quench my heart’s fire,
Such is my fate to live as an aberration…
In incomplete lives we lead,
We try to find deeper meanings,
Unlocked doors have always been before us,
But we keep staring at the damn ceilings…
It’s the criticism and the comments that keep a poet alive, so please oblige me with your opinion. All reviews positive/negative appreciated.Thanking you in anticipation of your valuable critique.
The Procrastinator's Prerogative 
Good then “damn” was that intentional?
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Yes it was, just to underline the frustration one feels on keeping on staring at the ceilings while the doors and windows are begging to get open. 🙂
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So many struggles within us make the human condition fascinating and painful and real..and worth writing about.
Well done Sahil!
john
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i really connect to your posts. I do.
Keep up the good work 🙂
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